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A few years ago I wrote for a blog, Pixelgawker, alongside colleagues Megan Deal and Chad Reichert. Now I occasionally write for the AIGA Detroit blog Superscript. Below are a few of my favorite pieces written for the aforementioned blogs. All of these pieces have been edited by the wonderful and talented Elizabeth Courtois.


Wish You Were Here

A few years ago while visiting friends in Chicago, I stopped in a small thrift store where I stumbled across a box filled with hundreds of old, used postcards whose dates ranged from the 1900s through the 1960s. Of all the antique items in the shop, I found these worn postcards the most fascinating. While my friends quickly moved from item to item about the store I sat and ran my fingers over the bent corners, faded images, and yellowed paper. I squinted as I tried to read the scrawled cursive messages on the backs. These postcards, which by nature of the format were designed to be a quick, brief, snapshot spoke volumes to me. They told the story of destinations which surely no longer look the same today, of the lost art of letter writing, and how there was once a time when the only information needed to ensure your letter reached its recipient was their name, city, and state.

I selected a few favorites, each for their own special reasons and made, what was to me, a purchase of insurmountable value. When I returned home, I scanned the cards, front and back and posted them on my Flickr site to share with my friends. I attempted to translate the handwriting on the backs and added the messages as typed captions. I took comfort knowing that should anything happen to them in their physical form, I could continue to reference them later. I imagined what the original sender would think, knowing someone was sharing their personal, private messages with the world.

I was recently reminded of my old postcard collection while watching the Blueprint America documentary Beyond the Motor City, about transportation in Detroit. Towards the beginning of the documentary, University of Michigan Professor of Architecture and Urban Planning Robert Fishman, stated "For a long time I have been collecting postcards of Detroit in its great era, that's because postcards show a city at its best. And I wanted to see the city when people really appreciated it, when they loved it, when it had a real grandeur and sense of its own importance." As he compared his dated postcards of Detroit to the buildings in their current state I couldn't help but note the parallel between how people nostalgically talk about the days of letter writing to the way my grandparents' generation reminisce about Detroit in the 1940s.

I am not alone in my passion for collecting postcards. Deltiology, the formal name given to the hobby of collecting postcards, is widely regarded to be one of the three most common collecting hobbies in the world, only behind coins and stamps. Commercial postcards in the United States were made legal by Congress in 1889 making the history of mailing postcards one hundred and twenty-one years old.

This long history has provided deltiologists with an enormous range of more specific subjects to choose to collect. Some, like Fishman, collect postcards of a particular city. Others collect a particular illustration, photographic, or printing style, or cards from a certain time period.

Fishman has a productive motive behind his collection: "I wanted to have a counter vision to put in place of what was right in front of my eyes which was the ruins, the decay, the failure. If you only see the failure you're not seeing the real history and you're not seeing the real future. To have a future you have to really understand what these places stood for, what they achieved, so that you might be able to imagine what they can become again."

The postal industry, in many ways like Detroit, has struggled to keep up with the modern world. Since the digital boom the industry has been dwindling and with it printed media in general. Earlier this year, due to lack of use there were discussions of discontinuing Saturday mail delivery. Not only has the prevalence of Internet communication slowed business for the postal service, it has altered the content of the messages being sent. It's difficult to imagine a girl in 1924 writing her mother on the back of a postcard from her trip abroad, only to update her on what time she brushed her teeth or how the season finale of her favorite show ended. Additionally, the frequency with which we communicate has drastically increased. I barely have interest in reading majority my friend's Facebook statuses and "tweets" that update every few seconds, let alone any desire to catalog them to reference again in fifty years. The fact that these postcards are able to be in my possession today is evidence that they were of value to someone, at some point, who felt the need to cherish and save them. I can say with certainty that no stranger will want to purchase my day-to-day Emails in a thrift shop in the future.

During the past few years since the fall of the Big Three the media have focused their lens on Detroit. Initially I was optimistic about the attention but as story after story centered only on the negative aspects of the city while offering no solutions or suggestions for improvement I began to go numb to it. Every week I turn on the radio to yet another story about Detroit's corrupt politicians, failing schools, foreclosed homes, and abandoned factories. The over-saturation of coverage on these topics has lead many to indifference. Just like Facebook statuses, reporting on Detroit's state has become void of meaning.

When I visit my former professors at the newly remolded GM design center which is now home to the College for Creative Studies, or attend a lecture at the MOCAD, I am reminded of all of the wonderful places that exist in Detroit today which have been built or renovated in the past decade. They never had the opportunity to appear in Fishman's postcard collection, for they did not exist in the 1940s. These places are representative of the new direction our city is headed in, of our future. They are proof that despite what the national media continually portrays, Detroit boasts many new and modern cultural amenities, educational facilities, and businesses -- all of which would look beautiful on the front of a postcard.

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Editors and Image Makers: On Photographing Detroit, Part 1

One of the most important jobs in the media, that of the editor, often goes unseen. A well-edited film is seamless in its delivery. There are no awkward cuts or pauses, and the plot transcends time and distance effortlessly. Recently Detroit has been a prime topic of interest both in the national media and in film. With the copious number of photographs and footage of the city circulating the Internet and television, I can't help but wonder, what is the edited version of Detroit that resides in the minds of the most of Americans? What are the parts left behind on the cutting room floor?

Often, the parts left out of a film are of equal importance to the story as those which are included. The deleted footage is removed intentionally to tell a specific story or to enhance a particular perspective. The national media's depiction of Detroit often takes one of two sides in its editing process: the first, a story of great sadness, decay and loss. The second, of the hopeful and optimistic who believe Detroit will become the next great artist haven, comparable to SoHo in the 1970s. Is it now the responsibility of the artists, designers, photographers, and journalists who call this city home to provide a counter for this so carefully edited tale of a shrinking city?

As a medium, photography and the ways in which it communicates to an audience have been scrutinized for decades. In the 1970s and 80s Susan Sontag and Roland Barthes both released revolutionary critiques of the medium for the time. Sontag believes that by nature, photography is an edited version of reality. In her essay In Plato's Cave, Sontag compares the role of photography in shaping the public's knowledge of a given topic or place, to that of shadows on a wall. In the allegory of Plato's cave, Plato envisions a group of prisoners who live the entirety of their lives chained in one place. Their only understanding of the outside world exists in the shadows created on a wall in front of them. Over time the prisoners begin to assign meaning to the shadows based on their limited knowledge of the object casting the shadows true form. Sontag states that "Humankind lingers unregenerately in Plato's cave, still reveling, its age-old habit, in mere images of truth." By this philosophy, the majority of Americans, who will never have the opportunity to experience Detroit firsthand, will know the city only through photographs. Photographs they will assume to be depicting reality.

By no means do I intend to imply disapproval of artists and designers who use Detroit as their subject matter. On the contrary, I think that this conflict creates an overwhelming need for those who live here to show their view of the city and the range of places, people, and activities here.

One person who is doing precisely this is photographer and filmmaker Geoffrey George. I first encountered George's work several years ago by a common means: conducting a Flickr search on "Detroit ruins." What initially struck me about his photographs is his stunning ability to capture the array of people, architecture, and infrastructure that is Detroit. In his photographs, you see not just the beauty that exists in its decay, but in both its thriving people and businesses, and the ones often forgotten or left in limbo. His knowledge of and enthusiasm for the city are evident in the captions accompanying his photos. And he is not shy about sharing his enthusiasm.

When I met with George to discuss his work, he told me that an increasing number of people are contacting him to ask for recommendations of places to see when they visit Detroit. He often ends up showing them around himself. "The ruins serve as an introduction to the city for people on the internet, or in books," George explained. "I think a lot of people like to look at images of Detroit online but they're not necessarily willing to come here. And when they do make the leap to come here I think it's important that they see other things than just ruins".

The ruins of Detroit may serve as an introduction to the city, but they also serve as an introduction to George's work. Many of his thousands of viewers find his photographs on Flickr the same way I did, by seeking out images of abandonment in Detroit. However, George's perspective on the subject provides an interesting twist on that of the national media. "I don't go into the ruins to exploit it and to make the city look bad. I think the ruins are an asset, in a way. They do contribute something to this city in a modern age. People are really interested in the subject matter and interested in the ruins of Detroit, like Michigan Central Station, in the same way that people are interested in the Acropolis in Athens or the Coliseum in Rome. It's a sign of past civilizations that no longer functions the same way."

Appreciating the ruins in their current state seems to be a shared perspective among local photographers. At a lecture put on by the Hamilton Anderson Association, Jim Griffioen, of Sweet Juniper, gave an enthralling hour-long talk based on the same perspective. Griffioen's education in the classics provided many great examples of how foreign cultures have come to appreciate their historic ruins and integrate them into what are now modern cities. Additionally he discussed the way ruins have been preserved at one of southeastern Michigan's greatest tourist destinations, Henry Ford's Greenfield Village, in contrast to the abandoned factory where the Model T was produced. Though both George and Griffioen are well aware Detroit does not need to be transformed in order to become a tourist destination, it already is one. The visitors attracted to this city are certainly not those targeted by the award winning Pure Michigan campaign, but rather people of like minds to themselves.

If you spend any more than a fleeting second on George's Flickr page, you will find much more than photos of abandonment. And if you are fortunate enough to find George as your personal city guide, don't expect the ruins to be the first thing you encounter. The first places George usually takes his visitors to are currently occupied buildings functioning as they were originally intended. "A lot of people don't imagine Detroit as having a downtown, they just imagine it as a big sea of abandoned factories. I think it's important for people to see that we have big impressive buildings here and not only do we have a skyline, but they're gems. They are architectural gems."

It's understandable that the vast majority of people think of Detroit as deserted. Frequently, film depictions of Detroit are apocalyptic. Movies like The Island and Transformers, and television programs like the History Channel's Life After People depict the city as completely vacant and barren. These images combined with narrative like "what will Detroit look like 40 years after people? We already know. Because of these haunting sites, its already happening," make it difficult to imagine anyone actually living in Detroit.

Despite what the media often implies, people are behind the ruins and newer architecture. The one million plus residents who have left Detroit behind since the riots of the 1960s receive more attention in the national media than the nine hundred thousand who still reside here. Geoffery George observes, "…really first and foremost in the city are the people. Those are the elements that are more important to the people that live here, the people around them. Not necessarily the ruins." He is currently in the process of trying to capture the wide range of people living in Detroit. "I want it to be comprehensive in a way, I want it to capture both street characters, homeless people, but also Larry Mongo of Cafe D'mongos or Dave Bing. I don't care. A range of people, political figures, artists, people who work in the city, professors, biker guys who work a computer job during the day and then bike at night, musicians… A little more all encompassing. I think its like the ruins, the city is not just poor people on the street, its not just the homeless".

One example George gives of the type of people he aims to capture is Barbara Sutton. "She is getting her PhD. She is 83 years old and travels, has a lot of energy for her age and appearance". When I asked George how he conducted most of his research on the city, he said a great deal of it, and often the best information, comes from the people living in and around the area. He went on to discuss people like Sutton, who have lived in the city their entire lives. "They are disappearing quickly, unfortunately, but I think there's a desire to want to capture that before those people disappear."

One of results of the fast and easy exchange of information via the Internet is that anyone with a computer can create and share images on a global platform, reaching a broad audience that otherwise would never have seen them. Some of George's photos on Flickr have been viewed tens of thousands of times. With the ability to evoke emotion, educate, and change perceptions, the medium of photography is a powerful force. I can only speak first hand in saying George's photography has and continues to change the way I view Detroit. His photography has taught me so much about a city I spent years living in, unaware of the beauty that lay beyond my college campus. I can only begin to imagine the effect it has had on those who have never had the opportunity to visit firsthand.

George's photos begin to fill in the gaps left by the national media. His photos of ruins go far beyond Michigan Central Station and the Packard Plant. His photos of the business district capture more than the single view from Canada, looking at the city from the outside. And his photos of people are not of one socioeconomic group. One person alone cannot single handedly mend the image the national media has created of Detroit. Perhaps as more and more local artists are recognized we will begin to see a shift in the portrayal of our city.

I know that like a shadow on a cave wall, this post serves only as my edited account of an interview with a Detroit photographer. Writing about this interview was a long process of cutting, pasting, and deleting segments from my two-hour long conversation with George. For this reason, I urge all of you to view George's work first hand. Additionally, like all my entries on Pixelgawker, it has been structurally and grammatically edited by my dear friend and editor Elizabeth Courtois.

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Editors and Image Makers: On Photographing Detroit, Part 2

The media has a long-standing history of controlling public perception. It often walks a fine line between informing and indoctrinating. Photographs play a significant role in how we receive and process information (as discussed in part one of this essay series). In an interview with the BBC, Dan Rather once stated that “those who control images will control public opinion.” This is not a new concept. While it is widely acknowledged that images are a vehicle for controlling opinions and beliefs, on a day-to-day basis, the truthfulness behind photographs seen in the news is rarely disputed. Today, when an image is created and put on the Internet, it’s impossible to tell how far it will travel, where it will end up and how many eyes it will be viewed by. News sources frequently use photos captured with cell phones and low quality point and shoot digital cameras in their coverage. The line between journalism and art is blurring. Individuals like Geoffrey George and Jim Griffioen who were previously creating images for their own purposes now find their images viewed by hundreds of thousands of people. Thus the role of the image-maker comes with great power and responsibility, regardless of whether the creator of the image originally intended for widespread dispersion of their creation.

Interactivity too, has greatly altered the course of the news coverage. It’s something the current X and Y Generations, who grew up with the Internet in their homes and schools, take for granted. In the 1972 BBC documentary, Ways of Seeing, John Berger describes the power of images on television, before the Internet existed in its present form. “The images may be like words but there is no dialog yet. You cannot reply to me, for that to become possible in the modern media of communication, access to television must be extended beyond its present narrow limits.” The ability to reply, to comment, is empowering. A recent example of this happened locally in the strong reactions to Time Magazine’s Assignment Detroit commissioned advertisements, “Selling Detroit.” In just days hundreds of replies poured in from outraged individuals. I can speak first hand in saying I felt a certain sense of satisfaction in being granted the opportunity to publicly voice my disapproval for the project. Seeing venomous response from the vast number of people outraged by this even lead a few local creatives to start their own campaign, Attribution Detroit, in response.

Enter Single Barrel Detroit. A local collective of musicians, designers, directors, writers, audio engineers, photographers, and editors with a simple goal: to bring attention to the sounds and sights of Detroit. They do so through a multi-sensory experience, combining video, music, still photos, and written descriptions of musicians performing in various distinctly Detroit locations, each song recorded in a single video shoot.

For Single Barrel’s producers Andy Martin and Jared Groth, it’s not about following the latest media trend of capturing Detroit’s ruins, which for decades now have been familiar to those who live here. They don’t have a political agenda and they aren’t trying to fix massive problems like a broken education system. “We’ve shot in the DIA, we’ve shot at the Saint Patty’s Day parade. It’s not just about the abandonment and Detroit being left behind. Its just about where we come from and its current state and how to depict that beautifully. We’re not trying to preach or tell a story or anything else beyond that.” The goals of Single Barrel are not enormous and unreachable. It’s a large factor in why they have been so successful. They’re interested in showcasing what they are passionate about to a broader audience, and that’s what they’re doing.

Historically music has played a large role in how Detroit is presented to the world. With a past so tied to music from Motown to garage rock to techno, Martin and Groth are continuing that tradition in a new and modern way. Using the medium of video and employing the Internet as their vehicle, they bring voices unknown both to many outsiders and to Detroiters front and center. “It [Detroit] has this amazing past with music and that’s what people always go back to. And then theres those artists that break through, like Kid Rock and the White Stripes and that’s it. So there’s all these other bands. It’s more about trying to show those guys off. Like Rodriguez, he’s this guy who’s in Detroit and should have so much more notoriety. He deserves attention whether it’s international or even people here in Detroit.” Martin explained. Groth elaborated, “First and foremost I want make the bands that are important to us known locally. I think so many people come from Detroit and don’t really know what’s going on in Detroit and kind of want to know but don’t know where to go to see bands play live and don’t know what they sound like.” Aaron Johnstone, who photographed one of Single Barrel’s shoots added, “Everyone in Detroit not knowing what’s going on in Detroit has been going on for a long time. There’s a set up audience in Europe for a lot of Detroit musicians. They just go there and they see on the headline ‘this is a rapper from Detroit’ [and] you just automatically going to get kids going to that.”

With each of Single Barrel’s shoots Martin and Groth make a conscious effort to select new individuals to participate in their process. “We get a different photographer for each shoot. We try to make sure that someone else’s creative vision is able to come through,” Martin explained. “We knew people going into it but at the same time I think that’s what’s been interesting about it. We meet new people along the way whether it be an editor that comes in, or someone with a new idea or even new bands. We’re constantly coming into contact with more and more of the creative community in the Detroit area.” It’s so simple yet simultaneously brilliant. By involving different people, who will each inherently visualize the same thing differently than the next, Single Barrel ensures a unique outcome each and every time. “The fact that they use different writers to do synopsis, editors and different people are shooting from time to time opens it up so much to interpretation that it becomes a very free art form because you’re not forced to read the same sentence over and over again,” added Candance O’Leary, who has photographed several Single Barrel Detroit shoots.

Not only is the final formatting and presentation of Martin and Groth’s work interactive, their entire process is as well. “We’ll try to in some way match a band to a location. As far as the location could influence or add anything to the performance,” Groth stated. “It seems like they’re inspired by the places. You can tell,” Martin added. Not only is the interaction between musician and location a key component in the final outcome of Single Barrel’s videos, the interaction between each member of the collective throughout the process is equally important. From the editors to the graphic designers and writers, each pair of hands involved molds the final outcome. I was shocked to learn that Single Barrel’s primary director of photography rarely knows the musicians or locations he is shooting prior to the day of the shoot. As Martin described, “He doesn’t even know the majority of it. He doesn’t know the music so he has no reference. He has no idea when the song is going to end. I mean you get the innate sense of the songs progression, of the songs pacing [and] that it’s going to end but that’s the cool part about it too, it’s built in spontaneity.”

There is something about that statement that serves as a fitting metaphor for Detroit. So many of Detroit’s problems lie in not knowing the future and having no control over the present. Like all of Single Barrel’s shoots there are no second takes. Certainly there are aspects of Detroit’s economic decline that could have been predicted, that should have been anticipated and planned for, but now people here are so caught up in their day-to-day survival that it’s difficult to plan any further ahead than tomorrow. The factor of spontaneity that works in art is not always comforting in day-to-day life. Maybe that’s why we need art and music to get us through.

At then end of the first segment inWays of Seeing Berger states, “with this program, as with all programs, you receive images and meanings which are arranged. I hope you will consider what I arrange but be skeptical of it.” To echo Berger’s sentiments, I hope you will please view Single Barrel’s and images on their site and consider the thoughts I have conveyed here. But please, as when viewing all images, when viewing images of Detroit, be skeptical.

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Detroit is the New Detroit

A recent panel discussion consisting of local artists and educators ranging from an architect to a museum director was held at the MOCAD (Museum of Contemporary Art Detroit). Its title, “Is Detroit the New Berlin?” spoke directly to the constant comparison of Detroit to other cities, and to its reinvention. Throughout the conversation a given speaker would name a distant city and attempt to discuss that particular places conflicts in relation to Detroit. Almost immediately after making such a statement though it became evident to the audience as well as to the speaker that the particular issue they were speaking of and the solution that place found was not applicable to Detroit.

Opposite terms are ‘born together.’ To have or learn one is to have or learn the other. You cannot have mastered water unless you also know what is not water.

from A Daoist Theory of Chinese Thought by Chad Hansen

It is human nature to compare and contrast in order to understand the world. We juxtapose to communicate ideas, to describe an object, person, or place clearly.

Perhaps this is why people are so eager to draw comparisons between Detroit and other great, failed industrial cities. Perhaps this is why people like to discuss Detroit in terms of what it was and is no longer. But a question still remains: do these comparisons help or hinder the creation of a new model for Detroit?

While it is important to learn from the past struggles and work of people elsewhere, Detroit is none of the cities to which it is likened. Detroit in 2009 is not the city that it was in 1940. Nor is it Berlin, Vancouver, Pittsburgh, Moscow, Manchester, or Liverpool. Detroit exists in a unique time and a place, with unprecedented conflicts and hardships. In order for Detroit to reach a point of stability, a new model for commerce, industry, and urban living must come into play.

Like the economic infrastructure of Detroit, the infrastructures of many American companies are changing drastically due to the current recession. Some large, failing corporations have been swallowed by former competitors, while others have been forced to downsize. And in another sense, downsizing is an idea with which Detroit residents have become a bit too familiar. The city has been “downsizing” its population for the past forty years. Once home to two million, the city looks and functions much differently at 800,000 residents.

Similar to shifts in most industries, the former model for a successful design company is evolving. Jobs once accomplished by many are now completed by a single individual with a computer and the Adobe Creative Suite. And therefore the design world, like the rest of Detroit, is shrinking. As larger advertising agencies lay off two to three hundred employees at a time, many designers are left unemployed with no prospects.

Detroit has never been a city for chain restaurants and stores. A place housing a mere five Starbucks within its bounds allows small businesses to establish themselves and thrive, because they do not have to compete with larger corporate giants. It only makes sense that its design firms follow suit. And many of these newly unemployed designers are striking out on their own through freelance, some with the hopes that it could one day turn into a small studio of their own. Though Detroit may not be known on a national level for the number of small design studios that call this city home, we are here.

While researching for Pixelgawker I am continually surprised at the number of local studios I stumble across that I had never heard of before. The sprawling nature of Detroit combined with harsh competition for design business from the Big Three, the largest clients for many local design firms and advertising agencies in Detroit, make it difficult for designers to connect with one another. While there are many studios and organizations doing interesting work, the conflict lies in that they are all happening as isolated conversations.

Rather than being a place you can understand by comparing it to a known post-industrial city, Detroit’s condition is a new concept to comprehend; it is what a great American city looks like when the people leave. It is only now that the same looming threat of industrial and economic disaster has been imposed on other parts of the United States that the rest of the country is paying attention. Over the past few months, amidst the constant headlines announcing drastic changes in the American automotive industry, I have noticed that the city of Detroit has garnered a lot of nationwide attention. Projects like The Powerhouse Project, The Detroit Unreal Estate Agency, 100 Abandoned Houses, and Time Magazine’s article “Detroit’s Beautiful, Horrible Decline” are reaching tens of thousands foreign eyes — and people like to root for the underdog.

A comment that stayed with me, from the panel discussion at the MOCAD offered the possibility of considering vacancy as a positive, rather than negative, attribute. I constantly have to remind myself to focus not on what this city lacks but rather on what it has to offer. It’s not over developed — there is a vast amount of empty space. The countless small, independently owned businesses and unique organizations that have arisen from grass roots efforts. Often, the best artistic inspiration comes from heartbreak, and Detroit is an incredible muse. It is a fact validated in the musicians, artists, designers, and people it produces. Perhaps as Detroit struggles to find a new model for design, and for itself, the rest of the world will listen.

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